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January 10, 2013
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Dark angel, (redraw) by selftaughtartist1 Dark angel, (redraw) by selftaughtartist1
i really liked my earlier submission ([link]) which was a doodle of a girl with bat wings rapped around her to make a heart. but i didn't like the animated quality of it so i redrew her on 20X25 (ish) paper so i could make her more realistic. this is what i came up with! she is more of a half dragon half girl than a dark angel now. and i added an earing and a pendant.

i have a question for you all

i am trying to save up money so i can participate in a personality pageant (like a beauty pageant but they focus more on your personality so i actually have a chance) and to do so i need to earn money.
if i got a booth at a mall and put this piece up for sale, do you think it would sell? (if not, why not, if so, how much do you think would be a good price?)
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Hello Adrienne! :D

There's a noticeable difference in this redrawn version of the deviation than in the original. :nod: This is a good thing!

Obviously, since this is a constructive critique, I will be sure to name something that I think can be improved to make this piece and/or future artworks better!

I know that the impression is supposed to be that she is wrapping her wings around her body, but the way that it is drawn makes it appear like she is in some kind of cocoon. I think that you can correct this by perhaps leaving the wings open a bit, so you can see that the wings are a part of the character's body. It would also let people know the difference between the wings and the arms. :)

I hope this helps! :la:
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The way you used the wings in this drawing limits the amount of detail you can have. I suggest if you decide drawing this again that you let the wings be spread out more, so then you can show more of a body for the girl.
The expression kinda throws me off. It looks like you wanted like a mischievous smile, but the half of the smile that shows doesn't really fit.
One thing I love the way you drew the wings. There's lots of detail in it.
With the hair covering half of her face it makes you look kinda lazy, and again that limits the amount of detail you have. I suggest steering away from covering the other eye so you don't have to draw it. Draw that eye! Practice makes perfect!
I hope this critique helps!
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Black-Sweater Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG so beautifull XDDDD
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selftaughtartist1 Jan 12, 2013  Student Filmographer
thanks :)
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Black-Sweater Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no probs ^^
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selftaughtartist1 Jan 12, 2013  Student Filmographer
:D
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Black-Sweater Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDDDDD
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